Breathlessly

Heather Relken


4.50 · 2 ratings · Published: 13 Dec 2021

Breathlessly by Heather Relken
This is the FULL-LENGTH story of the short excerpt titled "Breathless", also available on Kindle & KU. As such, this story "Breathlessly" also features men loving other men, and those men simultaneously being in love with a woman.
This story features characters who have vastly inhuman anatomy and cultures.
Some readers may find the use of that inhuman anatomy strange and distasteful.
If you think you might be one of those readers, I recommend passing on this one <3

But if that's the sort of thing you like reading about, then you're in the right place!!!

*~*~* BOOK SYNOPSIS *~*~*

The Kholorua.

On Earth, we call them the Skyscrapers, or Whalemen. Giant, 400-foot tall creatures that are generally docile but have a nasty habit of taking people home as souvenirs. I was terrified when that massive orange cyclops showed up in my part of town and reached to pluck me up, but...turns out they take really good care of their pets.

This place is a sanctuary. Bordered with tall walls and no escape, but the wilderness inside is a haven.

Too bad the colony of humans already living here hate my gay ass. Only took me a few months to decide to take my gelly mattress and fuck off to the sandy beachfront and live there for the rest of my solitary life.

Until Vano. A Væliāḷu, a race of amphibious people, is dropped in from the sky to live in the lake I’ve set up home at. Did I mean to fall in love with what is basically an alien merman? No, no of course not. But Vano’s an amazing man and it’s been a while since someone was so genuinely nice to me. And Væliāḷu have a physical reaction to falling in love, their bodies shifting to represent that life-bond they share. When his happened, I...I thought I’d found my soulmate.

Until Mri. A female of his race, but this one on her deathbed. She’s got hardly a month left before her body shuts down for good, some fucked up evolutionary trait deciding that because she hasn’t had kids yet she’s not worth keeping alive. Which means Vano has some massive, sudden responsibilities to take care of. But she’s the damn sweetest person I’ve ever met, and I’m not surprised we fell in love at first sight.

That doesn’t make her impending doom any easier to swallow, but if she’s able to have kids soon enough, then we’ll all be alright. Won’t we? We’ll be one big happy family right? Right.

As long as she gives birth before her body fails her.

No hurry.

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What the Amazon reviews for the short-story excerpt have said about the story:

"Heather Relken...has a way at captivating your attention and wanting more!...The three characters in this book are some of the most wholesome I've seen in a while. There is no hidden agenda, just upfront and bold-face love between them." -Meghan

"Totally in love with this story. The premise is simply lovely, the characters believable, likable. I'd want to be friends with them. But it's also steamy, swoony, full of feels. Not every...story packs this much punch, but Heather Relken delivered with her alien merfolk and their chosen human. All the hearts!" -Justinn

"Absolutely adored it! The truly alien anatomy was fascinating and the spicy scenes were so creative and hot! Male anatomy that I’ve definitely never read before! So incredibly sweet and very sexy!" -Trena

"A stellar story. A plot so simply complex. I have no idea how she is able to, not only create a base-line idea, but then to build on that so deeply and take the story to a whole new level. Heather is nothing short of an extraordinary author and I am a fan for life. I am craving a sequel!" -Rhiannon

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